Hi guys ! Mine is very amatour. Because I'm just a recruit in this job. Have fun ! THE STORY: Josph Alan is a Major General in the USMC. Today he brought his son Jack with him. Because today is Jack's birthday ! Alan has lots of works to do and Jack wants to meet with his friend John. So his father sent him to the enterance of the park. While Jack and john was playing soccer, a strange man took their ball and said; "If you want to take this ball back, You should buy some of our drugs !" Of course Jack won't buy these illegal things. Because he was a good boy. So he just said that they haven't got enough money for this and added that his father was an officer at the Marine Corps (). But noway. They were threatening him. "Call your dady now or he won't be able to see your voice again ! When Mr. Alan got the bad news, He took 3 of his best men to locate and save the children. But they weren't only drug dealers. They were the famous Sicilian Mafia. And thay have the more manpower too. So they kidnapped the General and his son. Unfortunately they killed 2 Secret Service agents and one Gunnery Sergeant with using a RPG ! When the cops and FBI arrived, It was too late.There were 3 exploded bodies in 3 different bins. And They blew the cars too. A couple of hours later Intel reported that General and his son was in a farm with the entire LA Mafia Members Now police and the FBI know the location where the general is kept. The entire SWAT unit and a squad of Marines were ready to strike. They stormed the farm, and overthrew the Mafia's branch in Los Angeles. And of course now They were safe ! THE END. You know what they say guys; "Mess with the best, Die like the rest !" Hope that you liked it !